1st Person Poems

Ah, just when I thought my books were ready to start pitching. A writer friend pointed out how much better my poems could be if I took the time to make more of them in first person persepctive (especially when I'm teaching a lesson) than as they are when I say "you should do this..." It would be received better if I say "I should do this..." I've made the change in 3 or 4 of them in the Plaguing book. I noticed it doesn't work with all of them, but I can see some improvement for the ones that did work. As they say "Writing is Rewriting".